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Old 02-15-2009, 09:57 AM View Post #14 (Link)
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Exercise 2:

That dratted excuse of a farmer! Who was he to stand between me and my love? The shame of that moment, the look she gave me. She had made it very clear. That expression would haunt my dreams forever. We could only marry with her fatherís permission, see?. And there was I, a stupid lad, with a pig under my arms, hoping that would be enough to offer for her hand. Oh how he laughed at my face. I wish I could kill him right there, right then, and carry her away. And she had wanted me to do it.

Ha! 100 words exactly Well that was fun! I'm posting a short story eventually that will have something to do with this too, so this was a real exercise for me!
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