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Old 01-27-2013, 07:50 AM View Post #9 (Link)
Ares (Offline)
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This is for Isis.
Man, lovely guide. This is everything a beginner needs, or an experienced person needs, or everyone needs.

One thing I feel is, shouldn't it be a bit open-ended? You've sort of 'told' everyone what to do in a critique, rather than tell them to think about what they should do. A bit of lee-way wouldn't really hurt.
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