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Old 07-25-2008, 07:19 AM View Post #91 (Link)
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Gah. Moony, your voice is amazing. I'm a choir student, though, so I will make one comment... Are you sure you're supporting with your diaphragm? If so, right on! If not so much, I think it might strengthen the tone a little.

By the way, please don't hate me. I just want to make sure you're as radical as you can possibly be.

You're something beautiful
A contradiction
I wanna play the game,
I want the friction.
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Old 07-25-2008, 11:22 AM View Post #92 (Link)
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Yep! I'm a choir geek and yes, I was using my diaphragm. I am very good about that.

Thanks for asking though! I ain't gonna hurt you.
I'll serenade Venus, I'll serenade Mars,
And I'll burn with the fire of ten million stars,
And in time, and in time,
We will all be stars

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Old 07-28-2008, 05:42 AM View Post #93 (Link)
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ok, I'm putting up a poll in a new thread and closing this one Go there to vote for your favorite singer of all the choices
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Salem's Lot - Stephen King
A Game of Thrones - GRRM
The Lost Symbol - Dan Brown

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