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Old 04-20-2014, 05:32 AM View Post #1 (Link) The Dragon Has Arrived
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Hey guys! You know the drill; if you have anything you need a critique on, I'm your guy!* I'll keep a list of the critique requests here in this post, and hopefully I'll be able to do these in a timely manner.

*As long as those things are novels or short stories, that is. And oh yeah, preferably from the fantasy forums
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Old 12-03-2014, 06:26 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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If you could crit my first chapter in my "Rocky Mountain Chronicles "that would be great! Here is the link: http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=13862
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Old 03-26-2015, 12:42 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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Along with RockerBunny, I have also returned to YWO. If you need a critique, I can totally help!
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