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Old 06-25-2018, 12:11 PM View Post #1 (Link) Star Wars, Transformers, Halo, + Other Fanfic
Gyasi Myles (Offline)
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Clash of the Titans
Armageddon

Post 'Wrath of the Titans' world war between humans takes place, Poseidon conjures tidal waves that flood cities, Zeus conjures tornadoes plus lightning firestorms which ravage other cities.

While they flood, burn, and bomb the Earth as well as cities, leave the air steamy, titaness Tethys who's made of seawater, titan Oceanus who's made of river water which surrounds the Earth, titan Crius who's made of tiny exploding stars that become nebula gas then quickly reform into tiny stars, titan Hyperion who's made of burning heat and blinding light, plus titaness Phoebe who's made of burning heat and blinding light all clash with one another in a sibling spat over who's the best son or daughter of their parents Uranus and Gaia.

Flashback of infant Achille's mom dipping him in the Styx underworld river. Flashback of brown-skinned original greek woman, her toddler son Hercules, father Zeus who invokes newborn winged gargoyle that disguises itself as a statue for them to keep before he leaves them behind with it. In the present on a beach, Perseus war trains horse-armored black Pegasus who kicks and neighs, has razor-sharp unicorn horn shaped blade atop helmet.

They're stopped by bony malnourished fisherwomen plus fishermen who bitch about famine, barren land, why there's no animals to hunt for meat, all food fish, oysters, crustaceans vanishing from the ocean, can't find, see, or catch any. Zeus appears, admits he's pissed off at humanity's warlike behavior, blames it on the Trojans, says they disguised themselves in other nations' armor to cause world war. Zeus snitches on Gaia plus Poseidon, claims they caused the food shortages, brings that woman Io back to life so she can tag along with Pegasus and Perseus again, lets the trio know where to find Hercules and Achilles who can help, returns to Olympus.

The curvaceous angry goddess Gaia who's made of mountains, treed soil chunks, cries out waterfalls from her eyes, stands sky-high above Earth, looks far down while she causes more land to go barren, crops to spoil, landslides, earthquakes followed by seaquakes. Her heartbeats are heard, but her heart ain't seen. Even taller larger Uranus stands further above Earth, his auric transparent body is made of visible energy that pulsates, vibrates, fluxes with clouds inside his lower-body, exosphere meteors which float around inside his upper-body. His heartbeats are heard but his heart's not seen , he's furious, has meteorites strike/damage cities.

Angel-winged Eros pops up, tells Perseus those two want mankind extinct since the Athena worshiping Trojans always start shit with other nations. Eros hands him bow, quiver filled with special arrows of forgiveness and serenity, begs him to stop both by finding then aiming for their giant hidden hearts so they can get their titan daughters and sons to quit clashing with each other, flaps away into the sky. The trio meets/teams up with adult Achilles, Leo skin wearing adult Hercules plus his full-grown gargoyle, they sneak into Troy, one dungeon, free this human-fleshed satyr from it whose deformed human body's shaped like a monstrous goat.

The satyr thanks them then joins their team, at first they fail to pacify army of Trojan warriors, General Hector, King Priam, Prince Paris, goddess Athena, before they fight 'em all, whup their asses till ashamed Athena vanishes elsewhere. The Trojans surrender, go give apologies to all other nations who stop battling one another, swear they won't start shit with any other nation again. The Trojan's weapon and armor craftsman/blacksmith Hephaestus sticks welding war hammer into furnace, has its fire engulf it, flame hammers at Perseus and his team to burn all seven of them, makes distant Greece volcano erupt, yanks metals from up outta the ground, has each combine to form giant metallic mechanical mule that attacks.

Achilles fights the giant metallic mechanical mule, destroys it. The other six teammates battle Hephaestus then defeat him. Hercules helps prevent Greeks from getting lava burnt to death when gliding gargoyle uses its long tail to drag him upside down around in one large circle as he digs up the earth with twin shields. They trap the flowing lava down in the shield dug chasm circle. Next the team warship flotilla voyages alongside Greek navy, gets ambushed by Poseidon as well as his dozen sea serpents.

Greek shipmates catapult barrages of those fireball thingies at the sea serpents which bash and burn them, Hercules mount flies on gargoyle who helps him slay some, Perseus ride soars on Pegasus who helps him slay a few. Poseidon uses waterspout to carry hisself around in the sky, trident to prong Perseus and Hercules, retreats underwater once his twelve sea serpents are slain. Maelstrom sucks the flotilla down onto rocky ocean of Inner Earth where flapping Sirens sing, their lovely hypnotic voices put Achilles, satyr, Perseus, Hercules, plus every other man in trances, lure male steerers against rocks, have each kill themselves plus all shipmates once they warship crash. Io and woman shipmates take the wheel since they're impervious to the Siren voices, Pegasus and gargoyle take flight then go combat the Sirens.

They reach Poseidon's flooded abode which all Outer Earth fish, oysters, crustaceans are sucked down into or migrate to while Poseidon calls them inside. The team and greek warriors skirmish with sword, shield, and spear wielding fish-faced mermen plus mermaids who have octopus tentacles for hair, some have seahorse tail lower bodies, others have eel tail lower bodies. Poseidon chokeholds Achilles, tries to suffocate him with hand emitted water-mask, gets defeated by him, complies sending all sea animals back up to Outter Earth, unfloods cities when Achilles threatens to finish him.

Afterwards gargoyle and Pegasus swoop Io, satyr, Achilles, Perseus, Hercules down through Gaia's breast hole opening which leads to the underworld where Charon canoes them down Acheron river. They fight one hydra, Hades, his werewolf-looking hellhounds who have countless ears, many biting mouths, plus sniffing noses all-over their bodies, several bushy tails on their rear ends instead of just one, fifty-headed alpha hellhound pack leader Cerberus, snake-haired gorgons Stheno and Euryale. Achilles dispatches Euryale and Stheno, Hercules burns the hydra to death by pushing it in Gaia's internal lava pool within her stomach, Cerberus gets beheaded to his demise by Perseus. From his palms Hades shoots that blackish aging dust at satyr, gargoyle, and Pegasus till all three look elderly, sickly, and feeble almost dead.

Achilles intervenes, Hades heel wounds Achilles, Zeus enters cave opening with them, Hades hellfire burns Zeus setting his whole body ablaze so that Zeus stumbles towards cave cliff. Zeus conjures thundershower, has its rain pour on him, extinguish the flame, thunderbolt sword pries out Hades's spleen, leaves Hades slumped dead before his corpse bleeds ichor then turns to ash. Pegasus, gargoyle, and satyr revert to their previous ages, Perseus finds Gaia's gigantic heart, uses that special bow with arrows to pierce it which makes her quit raging. Apollo comes to Achilles aid, Achilles rejects his offer to heal his aching heel, assures him he's alright it'll heal itself.

Pegasus and gargoyle then wing the rest of the team up walking Uranus's cloudy lower body where they sky war against his flying guard griffins, take cover in clouds, pop outta clouds for surprise attacks.They reach Uranus's exospheric upper body, land on floating meteors, find his gigantic heart that's guarded by winging Draco the dragon, monstrous bear Ursa Major who roars atop meteor, plus Sagittarius the centaur who's horse-faced, has four human legs instead of horse legs on his lower-body horse torso, two horse legs on his upper body human torso below his two human arms, which he uses to fling arrows from his bow while he jumps from meteor to meteor.

Io, Perseus, and Pegasus slay Ursa Major, Sagittarius heel wounds then knocks off Achilles whose heel bleeds from arrow lodged in it which has him die of exsanguination. Gargoyle helps Hercules slay Draco, satyr handles Sagittarius, avenges Achille's death. In the end Perseus reuses Eros's bow and arrows to pierce Uranus's heart till he ceases to meteorite strike Earth, Gaia and Uranus break up the fight between their Titan sons and daughters, evanesce to someplace else ahead of when the titans disappear also.

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No dialogue makes these long-winded and ridiculous haha
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