Need a critique?

Rebekah · 12-25-2017, 06:44 AM

If you need anything critiquing let me know via PM, VM or replying to this thread. If you ask me, I should have completed your request in about 2 or 3 days. I can critique anything, however I prefer to critique short stories.

Georgy · 12-25-2017, 10:28 AM

Hi, Rebekah, it would be nice of you to critique my last story, but I don't insist on your doing this in 2-3 days (a couple of weeks I can wait actually), besides, I don't expect you to critique the whole thing, just a half of the story would be enough, okay? Merry Christmas, good luck.

WriterKitty · 12-25-2017, 05:04 PM

Hello Rebekah, ^-^ I'd really appreciate it if you could critique my story called, The Girl in the woods. (it's the first chapter of the novel)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=16888

Thank you in advance, and Merry Christmas!

lukenlow · 03-27-2018, 01:14 PM

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12-25-2017, 06:44 AM	View Post #1 (Link) Need a critique?
Rebekah Abstract Thinker Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: UK Posts: 43 Points: 20 Times Thanked: 7	If you need anything critiquing let me know via PM, VM or replying to this thread. If you ask me, I should have completed your request in about 2 or 3 days. I can critique anything, however I prefer to critique short stories. __________________ Rebekah Have A Great Day!

12-25-2017, 10:28 AM	View Post #2 (Link)
Georgy Scholarly Apprentice Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Somewhere Posts: 231 Points: 2.68 Times Thanked: 88	Hi, Rebekah, it would be nice of you to critique my last story, but I don't insist on your doing this in 2-3 days (a couple of weeks I can wait actually), besides, I don't expect you to critique the whole thing, just a half of the story would be enough, okay? Merry Christmas, good luck. __________________ "And the internet has everything on it. It's a blessing and a curse." InfinityMan "The point of poetic prose, in my opinion, is to illuminate a truth, make us see something that's there, but hidden." Dabs "I believe we stand together to address the real issues facing this country, not allow them to divide us by race or where we come from. Let's create an America that works for all of us, not the handful on top." Senator B.Sanders

12-25-2017, 05:04 PM	View Post #3 (Link)
WriterKitty Novice Writer Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 13 Points: 2.18 Times Thanked: 0	Hello Rebekah, ^-^ I'd really appreciate it if you could critique my story called, The Girl in the woods. (it's the first chapter of the novel) http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=16888 Thank you in advance, and Merry Christmas!

03-27-2018, 01:14 PM	View Post #4 (Link)
lukenlow Novice Writer Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 11 Points: 5 Times Thanked: 0	Thank you, this is exactly what you want to hear on this forum 192.168.l.254