Community Forum
Today's Posts
FAQ & Rules
Members List

Writing Forum
Recent Posts
Critique Guidelines

YWO Social Groups



Support YWO
YWO Merchandise
The Book Despository (US) (UK) (Canada)


Thread Tools
Old 02-03-2014, 09:57 PM View Post #1 (Link) Experimenting with my new camera
SoulSurf13 (Offline)
Abstract Thinker
SoulSurf13's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Outside your window
Posts: 45
Points: 12
Times Thanked: 8
Hello! Just a few shots I've gotten recently with my newest camera. Any feedback is great! Thanks!



I'm imagining your brain naked. I'm not impressed.
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-13-2014, 06:43 PM View Post #2 (Link)
ScottyMcGee (Offline)
Freelance Writer
ScottyMcGee's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 1,754
Points: 30
Times Thanked: 176
This is old but there's only so many recent photography threads and nobody looked at this. I dabble in photography myself and I'm bored at work, so I wanted to do this.

Originally Posted by SoulSurf13 View Post
Hello! Just a few shots I've gotten recently with my newest camera. Any feedback is great! Thanks!


I like this first one the best. I can literally feel the coarseness of the tree. A part of me wants to see more of it, like maybe if you had widened the angle to include more tree into the close-up. But it still gives me a great feeling about it.


Still cool, although something feels off about it. I think it's at a slight, disagreeable angle. But it gives a great sense of zoom. I took a picture of a dark tunnel once and I felt a bit of the same sensation when I looked at this.


Like you said, you were experimenting and so I'm not sure if this was meant to be artsy or you just took a random picture of your cat (yours I assume?). I didn't feel anything with this one. The fact that the ears are cut off slightly irks me. There's also too much light
Only thieves kiss with their eyes open.
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2014, 11:31 PM View Post #3 (Link)
FlamingArrow (Offline)
Literary Newbie
FlamingArrow's Avatar
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 7
Points: 29.9
Times Thanked: 1
Well for the first photograph, I really love the feeling it gives me, really reminds me of nature. The second one is by far my favorite, It's pleasant seeing each little flake of snow. For the last one, I think you should of focused it a little more and maybe changed the lighting a little bit, in general the last photo is very yellow. Otherwise nice photographs, you're on your way to being a great photographer!
  Reply With Quote
Thread Tools


All times are GMT. The time now is 02:49 PM.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7 - Copyright ©2000 - 2018, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
All writing Copyright © its author(s). All other material Copyright © 2007-2012 Young Writers Online unless otherwise specified.
Managed by Andrew Kukwa (Andy) and Shaun Duke (Shaun) from The World in the Satin Bag. Design by HTWoRKS.