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Old 10-30-2014, 08:14 PM View Post #1 (Link) (Mood: I don't care)
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This is my first time uploading please critique truthfully. Thanks
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Old 10-30-2014, 08:15 PM View Post #2 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Hum.. Please how can I copy the URL instead posting the real picture. Please tell me
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Old 11-23-2014, 05:15 PM View Post #3 (Link) Beautiful!
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This photo is amazing. The way the person is holding her hand, and making her face is exactly saying "I Don't Care".
The only thing that doesn't say "I don't care" is the rest of her body. Usually when people do that a hand is on a hip. Also people lean more on one leg than the other (the person might be but it's difficult to see).

But in all, great photo!!!
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Old 07-17-2015, 02:50 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Nice picture.
Like you seeing God
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