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Old 12-25-2017, 06:44 AM View Post #1 (Link) Need a critique?
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If you need anything critiquing let me know via PM, VM or replying to this thread. If you ask me, I should have completed your request in about 2 or 3 days. I can critique anything, however I prefer to critique short stories.
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Old 12-25-2017, 10:28 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Hi, Rebekah, it would be nice of you to critique my last story, but I don't insist on your doing this in 2-3 days (a couple of weeks I can wait actually), besides, I don't expect you to critique the whole thing, just a half of the story would be enough, okay? Merry Christmas, good luck.
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Old 12-25-2017, 05:04 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Hello Rebekah, ^-^ I'd really appreciate it if you could critique my story called, The Girl in the woods. (it's the first chapter of the novel)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=16888

Thank you in advance, and Merry Christmas!
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Thank you, this is exactly what you want to hear on this forum 192.168.l.254
  
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The review of essay writing services novel is really amazing. I have no words to admire you but really you have done the incredible job what a lovely novel you have written. Keep it up and I will wait for the second chapter edgily.
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I would appreciate a critique on the narrative I posted
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Old 05-13-2018, 07:58 AM View Post #7 (Link) WordWizard
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Originally Posted by WordWizard View Post
I would appreciate a critique on the narrative I posted
Just finished reading and critiquing your narrative WordWizard. Sorry that it took me slightly longer. I hope that you found it useful!
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