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Old 01-03-2013, 06:24 AM View Post #1 (Link) Taking Requests
VioletteD16 (Offline)
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I'm new on this site but I have experience critiquing. I don't just critique online. I also critique at school and everything, so I do know what I'm doing.

I'm willing to critique short stories mainly. I'll also take a chapter at a time for novels, novellas, etc. I might take a poem or two. It depends on the topic. Hope to help
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Old 01-04-2013, 03:37 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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This please?:
Break it. Tear it. I don't care. Thanks in advance!
Can I be your friend? *creepy smile*

Humanity is contagious and that's why no man is an island.

yan-tsun-kuu-dan- dere dere

satisfaction leads to more desire.
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Old 01-06-2013, 05:47 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Please and thank you.
Need crits?
Just request.
The Rebellion is finally ready to make its mark and dethrone Lucian. There's only one problem: They need allies. In search of help from other nations, Sparrow travels around the world with Lucian's men hot on her heels . . .
Check out Sparrow!
More chapters to come soon.
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Old 01-08-2013, 01:01 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Any of mine would be great... i have a few short stories and a poem, and two chapters. I could really do with some comments Thanks!

Please don't hesitate to message me if you have any comments or questions, I'm always happy to talk about anything reading or writing related. If you want me to look at your writing just ask!
It is not hard to write what one feels as truth. It is damned hard to live by it.
-Eugene O'Neil to Alexander Berkman
I am also a major Tumblr addict and have a collection of quotes (reblogged and stockpiled over the course of five years) that you are welcome to peruse
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