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Old 02-03-2012, 06:41 PM View Post #111 (Link)
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you once...
forgot to...flush...
after you went for
number 2.
I couldn't take it.
I just... it was horrifying.
I curled up in the corner of
the bathroom that night,
wondering what you had eaten,
thinking how we ended up like this.
I remembered when you had once
touched me... in bed,
and I wondered...
had you washed your hands before that?
I recall, when once, we were out of toilet paper,
and you didn't mind that. Had you used your... shirt?
All the memories, like water getting flushed down the toilet,
swelling and getting swallowed... and you
were out there preparing dinner for two.
Das ist das ende

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Old 02-05-2012, 08:36 PM View Post #112 (Link)
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you okay


you look kind of not okay

I'm okay
Originally Posted by Samuel Beckett, Worstward Ho
The void. Before the staring eyes. Stare where they may. Far and wide. High and low. That narrow field. Know no more. See no more. Say no more. That alone. That little much of void alone.
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Old 02-06-2012, 05:43 PM View Post #113 (Link)
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Oh you are?
I thought you weren't
cause you're always moaning
but then when you sting
yourself, you get all relaxed
and stuff.
Das ist das ende

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Old 02-06-2012, 06:46 PM View Post #114 (Link)
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some songs on the radio are lame
they all start to sound the same
if I could just get up and switch it off
I would be a lot better off.
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Old 02-09-2012, 03:49 PM View Post #115 (Link)
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Today, I realized that
there are worse things
than a dead fat cat.

Instead of seeing a rat,
there was a kitten
without a torso on my mat.

[True story. Nasty shitass fuckers killed my babies.]
Most of my poetry is smut these days.
Epic narcoleptic.
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Old 02-10-2012, 03:32 PM View Post #116 (Link)
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Bunnies, bunnies
from here to there
I love you bunnies everywhere. xD
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Old 03-14-2012, 10:37 AM View Post #117 (Link)
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I suck at poems
Last night I lay in bed looking up at the deceptively small stars. They seemed endless as they lead into the oblivion sky and I thought to myself, where the hell is MY ceiling.

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Old 03-14-2012, 05:53 PM View Post #118 (Link)
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I baked a cake.
Wanna eat?
I baked a cake.
Did you know that I bake?
I baked a cake.
Are you in the mood
for some chocolate cake?
Cause I just
baked a cake.
But hey, wtf.
Since when did cakes
turn black and taste like
burned buildings?
Das ist das ende

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Old 03-14-2012, 06:45 PM View Post #119 (Link)
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Boo shakalaka boo shaka,
take my bong and suck it
boo shaka boo shakalaka
take my head and crush it.
and he saw himself nailed to the cross of his own cradle and coffin
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Old 03-16-2012, 05:46 AM View Post #120 (Link)
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your face belongs to the zoo
Don'get mad
'cause I'll be there for you
not in the cage
but laughing at you.
Don't lower your expectation to meet your performance. Raise your level of performance to meet your expectation. Expect the best of yourself, and then do what is necessary to make it a reality
-Ralph Marston

General expressions in non-concrete terms are laziness, they are talk, not art, not creation.
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