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Old 04-03-2018, 02:06 PM View Post #1 (Link) Hi, I'm new, I'm just starting to write
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I write different poems, sometimes simple rhymes. Sometimes I do not use rhymes, but I try to express what I feel and see in my words.
I am rather happy with life, but I know what sadness is. I spend a lot of time online.


I do not see where I can publish my poems, is there a section?
Here's a small sample:

I love the evening silence of my balcony,
Moths like orbs dancing by the lamp
Stars, cold and crickets symphony
the glow exalted the moon on my cheek like a stamp

Can you buy or sell?
Holy peace when your day
stops hitting like a bell.
When the cold rushes into the room
Are feelings a currency?
I have my own resume

Will this poe m change anything
or just an empty cry that no one will hear in any while.
Can bad news reach the ear of the exile?
Is this a path of freedom, also for conscience?
Think about what is the most valuable currency
and what currency you would like to buy
  
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Old 04-20-2018, 08:17 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Newbie here too! And this is a good piece of yours. To me, given how modern culture has changed, there is no specific need to use rhymes in poems, nor strict structure as well. I wonder, who exactly was your source of inspiration for this one?
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Old 04-29-2018, 06:00 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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infomrative.
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Old 04-29-2018, 07:22 PM View Post #4 (Link) Critic
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This is a really good poem! I recommend that you expand on it because i have a feeling that something is missing.
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Old 05-04-2018, 08:54 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Your poem looks good and I appreciate. Though, you have to experience well to incorporate literature. Poems are very helpful for the people how beautiful the literature is. Good luck in your endeavors!
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