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Old 03-13-2015, 07:29 PM View Post #551 (Link)
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Old 03-31-2015, 01:37 AM View Post #552 (Link)
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Old 04-14-2015, 02:42 AM View Post #553 (Link)
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Woman hit by car. No blood.

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The idea is if the dead woman was actually killed by the car, there would be blood-- internal injuries and torn skin and such. If she were dead beforehand (ie. murdered? crime covered up?), the blood would have stopped flowing, and there would be no bleeding.

I have no clue how well that is actually implied, but it was an interesting thought for a six word story.
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