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Old 02-11-2012, 08:12 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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See Alice's post above. Although, I would like to revive this competition.
and he saw himself nailed to the cross of his own cradle and coffin
Old 07-29-2012, 08:42 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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Just a quick one not very good;

An elderly shell
Hiding whats beneath
Inside is a child
A younge spirit
Waiting to be free

We do not relise
That they themselves
Are wise.
If you wish to see it
Just look into
Their eyes.
Old 08-02-2012, 02:18 PM View Post #23 (Link)
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Here's my entry.

The light of the candle
Flickered and fell
The rocker creaked in shadowy light
And the old man snored
Hands folded in his lap
Head tucked against his chest
The rocker creaked
And the old man slept
The flickering shadows watched
As mysterious things took place
The old man's hands fell apart
And there was a sudden peace on his face
The light of the candle
Flickered and fell
And danced against the wall
The rocker creaked in shadowy light
The old man wasn't there anymore.
"With great power comes great need to take a nap."
Nico d'Angelo

"To love without doubt is meaningless, but to doubt, yet, still love; that is a great feat indeed."
Old 08-02-2012, 02:26 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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This contest is closed. Lalodragon is running new, biweekly contests. Can someone please lock this?
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