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Old 06-17-2008, 02:00 AM View Post #51 (Link)
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She always knew she killed him.
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Keep it Simple, Stupid
Used when you overdo things in your writing to make it sound smarter. This is never needed! Simplicity wins. If something sounds overdone, cocky, or like Stephenie Meyer wrote it, KISS it away

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Old 06-18-2008, 01:58 AM View Post #52 (Link)
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Living forever is terrible, trust me.
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But we're not stupid-we know we're called Gred and Forge!
-George

Ah, but that's why it's so brilliant!
Because it's so pathetically dim witted.
-Fred and George

Arthur Weasley: Get out of the kitchen, Ron! Everybody's hungry!
George, Fred: Get out of the kitchen!
Arthur Weasley, to the twins: Feet off the table!
George, Fred: Feet off the table!
put feet back on the table

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Old 06-18-2008, 02:16 AM View Post #53 (Link)
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oooo! nice one blue!
My only regret: that he bled.
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Old 06-18-2008, 03:19 PM View Post #54 (Link)
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well how about this one:

I came. I observed. I passed.
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Old 06-25-2008, 10:04 PM View Post #55 (Link)
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Don't drop the nuke you asshole!
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She swung while other children played.
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Old 08-01-2008, 09:21 PM View Post #57 (Link)
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After death, will the world stop?
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Old 08-10-2008, 01:02 AM View Post #59 (Link)
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how will my soulless journey begin?
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The outside, why am I here?
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