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Old 10-16-2012, 11:40 AM View Post #1 (Link) Opening Critique Shop
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I'll be taking poetry/experimental writing critique requests from now on. Just post the link here.
Remember, poetry/experimental writing, no prose.

I'll be able to do a maximum of one or two per day, but I'll fulfill all requests (unless I don't understand your poem, in which case I'll tell you.)

Let the madness begin!
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Old 11-16-2012, 11:34 AM View Post #2 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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BUMMP

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Old 11-27-2012, 10:53 AM View Post #3 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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BUMMPPPPP

I have a lot of time in my hands for about two weeks or so, so if anyone wants critiques on their poetry of any sort, this is a good time. I'll critique poetry, prose-poetry and experimental stuff.

Just post on this thread or PM/VM me.
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Old 12-05-2012, 03:23 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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If you have the time/inclination to take a look at Claudine's blessing that would be much appreciated, but if not no worries.
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Old 12-05-2012, 11:39 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Since you seem to have so much time on your hands and if you're not too busy looking as Isis' poem, then take a minute and let me know what you think of my latest poem, The Greatest Poem Ever Wrote . Thank you.
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Old 12-06-2012, 12:29 PM View Post #6 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Originally Posted by Isis View Post
If you have the time/inclination to take a look at Claudine's blessing that would be much appreciated, but if not no worries.
Originally Posted by sbenzing View Post
Since you seem to have so much time on your hands and if you're not too busy looking as Isis' poem, then take a minute and let me know what you think of my latest poem, The Greatest Poem Ever Wrote . Thank you.
Consider both of them done. I'll try to get them done by Monday. If not, feel free to annoy the fuck out of me.
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Old 12-07-2012, 11:46 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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if you have the time.
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Old 12-08-2012, 04:41 PM View Post #8 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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I do. Expect it by Wednesday/Thursday.
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Old 12-15-2012, 01:35 AM View Post #9 (Link)
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Hey mind giving my story a little look?
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=10338
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