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Old 12-21-2008, 12:58 PM View Post #1 (Link) Need a crit?
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Okay, as some of you may have noticed... or not... I haven't critted anything in ages, to the point that I'm surprised I haven't at least had a warning PM from an admin or mod. 75% of this was laziness, and 25% of this was revision workload for my mocks. And now that the latter has gone, and it's now the Christmas holidays, I have nothing to do, really... so, I figured I'd better catch up on my crit load.

So, I want any of you that need a crit to post on here a link to something you want critting. Please note that I only crit prose and I prefer fantasy or sci-fi. If you ask me to crit any realistic fiction, I won't be much help, as I rarely read it.

I'm open to do this until I feel I've done enough. I think about 10-15 crits will be the minimum, I might go on from there.
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Old 12-23-2008, 05:33 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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...so, no one wants a crit?

I find that hard to believe.
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Old 12-23-2008, 06:47 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...5204#post65204

Geez, how many crits do you owe me?

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Old 12-23-2008, 06:57 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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'Kay, I'll add that to the list.

And I owe you... a lot.
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Old 12-23-2008, 07:18 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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Well if you wanted to critique poetry you could have a good at mine... But it says you only do prose so..
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PM me for Poetry crits!! I've been super neglectful of this site for so long. Put me to work.
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Old 12-24-2008, 02:54 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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Sorry, Ichi, but if I tried critting poetry, I'd just be staring at it for ages trying to find something wrong with it. Unless you have spelling mistakes, I can't help you. I tried crittig poetry before, I had no idea.



Sorry, again.
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Old 12-24-2008, 04:45 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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Hahaha no it's totally okay. I already got two crits for it, I was being greedy that's all.
One day I'll write some sort of novel/short story thing.... maybe. And then I'll FORCE you to crit it.
rawr.
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Old 12-24-2008, 04:55 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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Agh, the fear! Now I have both Adri-zilla and Ichi-zilla on my case.

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Old 12-24-2008, 05:55 PM View Post #9 (Link)
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=2349

^ ^ ^ There's something for you to crit if you have the time.

I'll do the same in reverse, so just ask! I prefer fantasy/scifi stories as well.
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Old 12-24-2008, 06:01 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Thank you~

Added to the list. XD

And you don't have to repay me - yet. I have a novel in the works, so sit tight.
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