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Old 05-12-2014, 09:34 PM View Post #1 (Link) April Spotlight
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You weaklings have disappointed me (except for Adrenalin Junkie who suggested one of my pieces; he/she is cool).

A Room for Two Knights by ScottyMcGee
A Strange Object by yours truly
The Joke's on Everyone by That's_Fancy

59 by Lalodragon
Mythology by Addicted to Reading
An Expression of Feminism by Julian

Give your love to everyone especially me.
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Old 05-12-2014, 10:15 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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I blame NaPo
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Pro-tip: because my first instinct is to procrastinate anything I see as an obligation or responsibility, asking me for a critique is a good way to make sure I never give you a critique.
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Old 05-12-2014, 10:49 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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whaa whaa I read a Room for Two Knights two years ago. Or something. I did not know it was up again. Thank you spotlight you have served me well.

Love to everybody! except whoever recommended me. Because really? my 58 was infinitely better.
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Old 05-16-2014, 07:04 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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I like how my story that STILL HASN'T BEEN CRITIQUED YET is in the spotlight *wink**wink*nudge*nudge*

(And to answer your confusion, lalo, it's a revision. This is my "Boy-I'm-really-feeling-that-this-is-close-to publishable-material" version)
Only thieves kiss with their eyes open.
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