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Old 01-01-2012, 09:22 AM View Post #1 (Link) Need a critique?
GeorgeMichael (Offline)
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If anyone would like a critique feel free to ask me and I'll do my best to quickly (I have nothing to do but write and read on this vacation) get to your story. I love reading all types of stories be it fantasy or realistic but please don't ask me to critique poetry. I would love to read it but I can't say that I would be able to give a very worthy critique on it.
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Old 01-02-2012, 05:35 PM View Post #2 (Link) Critique Please!
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Hello!

If you could actually critique my story "Kirsten in Wonderland" that would be awesome. I posted it yesterday and can't wait to get feedback! Please and thank you!

Write on!
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Old 12-03-2014, 05:40 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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If you could crit my first chapter in my "Rocky Mountain Chronicles "that would be great! Here is the link: http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=13862
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