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Old 12-09-2012, 02:05 AM View Post #1 (Link) Names with Meaning
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A lot of really great authors use names to add layers to their characters. They can reveal certain traits or highlight ones that the author wants everyone to remember.

So for this exercise, come up with a name that means or alludes to the trait that the person above you has left. It might be a bit of a challenge.

Example:
First poster - Gambler
Second poster - Spade

I'll start with:
Claustrophobic Short
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Old 12-11-2012, 02:54 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Well this seems fun, and I'm doing my best not to post "Tiny" or "Junior"

...It took me a while and some creativity, but how bout Minnie? Get it?

Next, try likes the ocean
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Old 12-13-2012, 09:10 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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I feel bad that nothing's happening so . . .

Likes the ocean = Marina Caspian (last name optional)

Next, BRAVE
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Old 12-13-2012, 09:12 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Samson Stronghart, the Third (the third adds all the bravery)

Next: This character will definitely stab you in the back halfway through the book.
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Old 12-13-2012, 09:44 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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I can't resist this one.

Cain Benedict -- I do hope people get this.

Next: The underdog of the tale
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Old 12-30-2012, 01:25 AM View Post #6 (Link)
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Woodric Zen


The person that is a vampire in secret.
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Old 12-30-2012, 07:36 AM View Post #7 (Link)
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The person that is a vampire in secret.
Mara Gazini

This next person is reflective and patient.
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Old 12-31-2012, 07:38 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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Master Toshiro Pei

Next: has a deep dark secret.
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Edward Black

Next: This person is second in line to become king.
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Henry Maximus Sinclair

Next is a witch...
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