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Old 01-01-2013, 06:42 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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The Rebellion is finally ready to make its mark and dethrone Lucian. There's only one problem: They need allies. In search of help from other nations, Sparrow travels around the world with Lucian's men hot on her heels . . .
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Old 01-01-2013, 07:06 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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Pro-tip: because my first instinct is to procrastinate anything I see as an obligation or responsibility, asking me for a critique is a good way to make sure I never give you a critique.
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Old 01-04-2013, 10:39 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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Old 01-05-2013, 12:42 AM View Post #14 (Link)
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Wow. So youre a Korean girl who grew up in Hong Kong, lives in the United States now and is studying Spanish in college? You know that's crazy right?
Jisun: I feel like I'm writing some Twilight shit.
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