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Old 07-20-2014, 03:34 PM View Post #1 (Link) Available for Critique Requests
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So, I am back and ready to get back to critiquing.

If you'd like me to disfigure your submissions, drop me a link to the thread and I will be happy to offer you one of my glittery critiques.

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EDIT: I will be posting a To Do List in which the submissions I will be replying to are organized according to the alphabetical order and divided into groups labeled by dates of when the critique request was received/crit ticket was given. (this should make perfect sense to you. :3)

If the link is later highlighted in red, it means that I have already submitted a critique to that submission. This should keep things neat and tidy and whatnot.

To Do List:

Sunday, July 20, 2014
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Old 07-20-2014, 09:07 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Hi Rose,

I would greatly appreciate any critique or comments you might have about my novel.
I have much to learn so don't hold back!

Thanks for your consideration.
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=13429
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Old 08-20-2014, 07:41 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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You still doing this? If so - click here
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Old 08-20-2014, 07:47 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Originally Posted by ScottyMcGee View Post
You still doing this? If so - click here
I'll try to get to it ASAP.
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Old 08-20-2014, 07:50 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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Sweet. Yayyy! Thanks.
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Old 08-20-2014, 08:01 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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Haha, no problem. But I have to warn you, I am rusty. Not just saying. And the story is pretty good so far.

EDIT: 666 views. The number of the devil D:
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Old 12-03-2014, 06:20 AM View Post #7 (Link)
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If you could crit my novel that would be amazing

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Old 12-24-2014, 08:48 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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currently unavailable for critiques. sorry ):
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Could you please critique my poem 'Messy' if you get time?
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Old 12-06-2015, 08:44 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Would be great if you can critique this for me
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