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Old 04-11-2015, 09:13 AM View Post #1 (Link) I will tear your writing to shreds... Critiques here
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Guess what happened... School holidays arrived for me!!!! Yayy!! and because of this I have lots of time to tear your poems and maybe short stories to shreds for you... So if you would like to have your writing brutally criticised by me then just let me know in this thread or in a message and I'll put it on my list.
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Old 04-12-2015, 11:03 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Originally Posted by han123 View Post
Guess what happened... School holidays arrived for me!!!! Yayy!! and because of this I have lots of time to tear your poems and maybe short stories to shreds for you... So if you would like to have your writing brutally criticised by me then just let me know in this thread or in a message and I'll put it on my list.
What do you mean by to shreds????
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Old 04-13-2015, 01:41 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Softballgirl333 View Post
What do you mean by to shreds????
I mean I will critique it harshly and be completely honest
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Old 04-16-2015, 05:21 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Do you critique anything? Or just poetry and experimental writing like it says you specialise in?
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Old 04-17-2015, 12:58 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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I'm happy to attempt to critique almost anything, but feel I am better with poetry, experimental writing and sometimes short stories. What did you need critiqued?
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Old 05-09-2015, 07:19 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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Maybe my poem, 'Weeping Willow', if you have the time that is.
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Old 05-11-2015, 10:59 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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Sure
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Old 06-01-2015, 10:48 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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Congrats on school being let off for you! I’m getting off on Friday. Anyway, can you critique my story please?? The link is right here: http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...779#post193779
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Old 06-03-2015, 10:04 AM View Post #9 (Link)
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Sure, but these crits may take a while guys. Sorry, just have been really busy.
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Old 06-03-2015, 11:18 AM View Post #10 (Link)
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It's okay! Just as long as you get around to it
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