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Old 06-05-2015, 10:16 PM View Post #1 (Link) Crit Request!!!
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I'm looking for critiques on some of my recent pieces - I would be grateful for any advice you have!
Poetry: Did you just say, First Dance
Lyrics: Jumpstart
Other/Experimental: "Writing"
Thanks so much!
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Old 06-06-2015, 11:17 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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I've posted a critique on Jumpstart and also on Heartblood. Hope they help.
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Also, if anyone felt like critiquing my poem "Dawn", I'd be grateful! Let me know if you have any crit requests, too.
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Actually, I realize this crit request kind of extends to every new poem I write.......so please, critique on!
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