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Old 08-18-2015, 07:02 PM View Post #1 (Link) Need a critique?
Keladry (Offline)
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Hello, all!

School doesn't start for another week or so, and I am consistently finding myself bored in the mornings when I'm tired of writing but not ready to do anything else yet. My solution? More critiques!

Because the site gets slow over the summer, I've been having a hard time figuring out what pieces are current and who is still looking for full critiques on pieces that are more than a week old. I'll still be looking through the recent posts, but I'm hoping this thread will help.

If you are currently looking for a critique, let me know! I will get to it as soon as I am able. If I won't be able to get to it, I will tell you so.

I am specifically looking for short stories, novels, and other prose. I love fantasy and sci-fi. I do also like critiquing visual artwork.

I will probably avoid critquing poetry for the time being.

Thanks!
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Old 08-27-2015, 11:34 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Hi! I'd appreciate it so much if you would critique one of my stories, the links to which I have below. It would be awesome if you could get to them by tomorrow.

http://youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=14697 (Aunt Edith)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=14651 (The Last of Color)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=14506 (April Weak is not Weak)

Thank you so much!
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Old 08-28-2015, 02:39 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Hello! I would love to critique one of your pieces!

I didn't see this until just now, but I'll probably be able to get to at least one of them today. I think I actually started to respond to Aunt Edith a day or two ago and then got distracted halfway through (oops) so it's not a big deal to go back and figure out where I left off.
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Old 01-19-2016, 10:26 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Me me me Keladry, please critique the second chapter of hades I have posted it members only novel section.
thanks in advance
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Old 01-20-2016, 08:24 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Hi I'm one of the newbies this week and would like to take you on your offer if it's still available.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=16123

Thank you very much.
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