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Old 10-03-2015, 08:47 PM View Post #1 (Link) Character Advice
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What advice would you give to a character in the book you're currently reading?
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Old 10-26-2015, 04:37 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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War and Peace so...

Andrei, get your shit together before you get your head blown off.
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Old 10-26-2015, 08:32 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Kester, listen to the cockroach!
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Crowley, stop the armageddon.
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Old 11-16-2015, 02:15 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Richard in Neverwhere, stop being so passive. How are you not freaking out? You just discovered a crazy lady who talks to animals.

(I'm only at the beginning, you can see.)
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Reading The Iron Trial:

Call, don't let the fire elemental out of his cage!
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Old 03-08-2016, 09:08 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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Rider, ditch them, ditch them all before they ditch you.
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