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Old 04-29-2017, 12:15 PM View Post #1 (Link) Need help writing a song for a pub scene in my fantasy book
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What I have so far is something, but I am not proud of it. In my book, there's this guy that gets drunk and ends up doing a little foot stomping and singing on a table in a tavern. Can you guys help with the song. Here it is,

"I'll up and burst your gritty mug
Beer is a joy, Oh boy
The joy of the Day
Ale is the male off scale
Beer and song is the height of the night all along
Beer is a joy, Oh boy
Rhyming is relying on
When you sing a swing
At yer shady pub"


This isn't going to be all the song. I hope to add more if I can figure out a good topic and rhythm with rhyming. The song in a way is like an Irish jig. It needs to be a song that makes the reader want to dance. And the singer, by the way, has a pretty low voice.
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Dude you might to post it in an appropriate thread in the writing forum. The newbie Zone is only for introducing yourself.
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Old 05-24-2017, 02:56 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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^ Yup. Lykaios told you, too, dude. Like I said - weird, cool librarians. Post this one in the writing forum (probably under 'Lyrics', in the Poetry section). If you're worried that no one will see it, go ahead and ping people - in the right place, most of us would very gladly help you out with this, so just leave a message on our profile page. But for the sake of neatness, being able to find your stuff easily and our sweet, wonderful Lykaios, we must insist, sirrah - to the writing forum with thee!
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