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Old 12-16-2007, 04:28 AM View Post #21 (Link)
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Haha, bravo, bravo!

Here's one:

School test. Fails. Comes home. Dies.
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Old 12-16-2007, 04:33 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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Old 12-16-2007, 04:45 PM View Post #23 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Eve View Post
Haha, bravo, bravo!

Here's one:

School test. Fails. Comes home. Dies.
It's like reading my life story....
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:44 AM View Post #24 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Nyx View Post
It's like reading my life story....
Haha, that's my life story too.
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:54 AM View Post #25 (Link)
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Oh please - I've done much worse...
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:57 AM View Post #26 (Link)
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No you have not. I have.
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Old 12-17-2007, 05:03 AM View Post #27 (Link)
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Praytell...what kind of screw up?
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Old 12-17-2007, 08:52 PM View Post #29 (Link)
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I don't understand what you're saying...
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