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Old 07-22-2010, 06:29 PM View Post #1 (Link) Write the Worst Poem You Can
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Just as the title say, write the worst poem you can, throw in as many cliches, bad rhymes, anything you can think of that makes a poem "bad". I know, it seems counter-intuitive, but I promise, it'll actually help your real poetry. Also, it's fun.
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Old 07-22-2010, 06:42 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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bitch bitch bitch
fucking cunt fucking cunt
lightsaber boogie on hipster
gotta light, b?
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Old 07-22-2010, 06:44 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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This is fun


The black heady night
the night of our fight
where my
(bro ken) heart
would start
to stop beating
and the crimson blood
would cease to pump
to these estranged limbs
you have taken.
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Old 07-22-2010, 06:53 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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ETERNITY

You will always be my only One
I will love you inconditionally
For always + eternity

You smell soo lovly
As are lips draw near. You see
The secret ive been hiding
T want you to choose me
Not him

I cant wait for eternity with You
Every day and every night
Your face will be ma gleaming light
I do not need heaven
If i have forever with you

Our love is differant
Human and vampire
But too me
Your're and angel god sent
You saved me
From my dark and lonely life
But now i have you
Thats all i need
To be happy for eternity

So sleep my bella
Dream happy dream
In the morning youll see me
Do not worry i wont leave
You are my everything
For always and eternity..............


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So bad, I stole it off the internet ... I mean. I wrote it all. And this didn't help my poetry writing at all
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Old 07-22-2010, 10:03 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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Touch my body and Ah ah
be all like Oh oh yes yes
stroke me like hurricane

Yes yes right there don't stop
because we are misunderstood
and I will
ah ah ah
in your you know where
with my you what

just like mmmmmmmmmm

gurl, you could be da one
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Old 07-23-2010, 05:55 AM View Post #6 (Link)
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I am the Monstrous Vermin


I stand before you,
Born from the seminal ooze
Of Kafka's wet dreams.
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Old 07-23-2010, 05:02 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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OMG LOL
I LOVE YOUSO MUCH!!!
Sometimes when I'm in bed at night
I think of you I CAN'T GET YOU OUT OF MY HEAD
I LOVE YOU SO MUTCH!!!
Please stop tortering me
it hurts to think about what
I'm missing
all the time
I LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH!
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Old 07-23-2010, 05:36 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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The knife was silver
shiny in the light
like a gem
and wen it touched me
i bled
bled
blood everywhere
on the ceiling
on the floor
blood
red like a pomegranate
i laughed like a crazy person.
i like pain.
i like blood.
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Spoiler:
Originally Posted by Caleb
when I hear the word poet

I think of you naked, rimbaud drinking, and how lovely my hair is


They sailed away, for a year and a day,
To the land where the bong-tree grows;
And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood,
With a ring at the end of his nose,

Word Count: 10000/50000
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Old 07-23-2010, 09:02 PM View Post #9 (Link)
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There once was a rapping tomato,
yes that's right, I said rapping tomato.
It rapped all day from April to May,
oh, yes, it was me.
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Old 07-24-2010, 01:36 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Hello, i wont to post dis puwem and i want u guyz to crit it. i don't think you might find many things to say, and i don't meen to brag but my grammer skillz are perfect!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
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In teh nyt
I c no lyt
Djust teh torn peecez ov my hart.
I am so sad
Evry 1 arawnd me iz so mad!
All in 1 cell
All r gowing too HELL!
No 1 iz hapy
Lyf iz sapy
I wont too DIE1 <-- (OMG! Typo. lol)
Then my lyf tshanjed wen u comed <--- (YES, i did say comed, because im an expert at poetry, so i can doo wut ever I want xD).
U taked me frum deaths hands
And have me all too ur self
U teer me doun then simply pik me up
U say dat u can heel me (YES heel)
But im stil bleeding betwean ur hands
like an i-scream cone on teh side of teh road on a summer august day.
Soon u will be teh DEATH of me,
U coz me to sufer
It herts, but i still wont you baby
so go ahed, sink ur fangs into my neck
suck my blood as it flow from my veins
i will not care any mor.
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This is so much fun. ^ ^
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