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Old 07-24-2010, 04:30 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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When i looked at you,
I caught the flu,
Because your face,
Reminds me of my moms old vaise,
bBefore it fell it looked pretty good,
But now it looks like your face...
I hate poems!!!
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Old 07-24-2010, 04:39 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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I was asleep
I had a dream
To do with a prick
And a sad drama queen
I got out bed,
smashed my head off my desk...

Then I wrote Twilight.

The End.
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Old 07-24-2010, 05:31 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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Blueberries…
Their sweet honey-like
Precipitate stains the
Pureness of the world.
Mom is gonna kill me for staining
Her white sheets. OMG HELP! :S
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Old 07-24-2010, 05:37 PM View Post #14 (Link)
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I will rip each limb
to each limb
to each limb
and once there then back again
sounds like rain on your
veranda cunt
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Old 07-25-2010, 02:14 AM View Post #15 (Link)
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I like pie,
it is quite ni-
ce, especially with i-
cing, wait, pie
does not have i-
cing.
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Originally Posted by Caleb
when I hear the word poet

I think of you naked, rimbaud drinking, and how lovely my hair is


They sailed away, for a year and a day,
To the land where the bong-tree grows;
And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood,
With a ring at the end of his nose,

Word Count: 10000/50000
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Old 07-25-2010, 12:43 PM View Post #16 (Link)
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If hashish is bad
but going green is
good,
then what is the difference between the two?
If pepto is pink and
dimetap is blue then what
does the color become when you mix the two?
He's stolen my
lucky charms
and I tell him he is just a silly rabbit but
sometimes he acts like some sad
fool.
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Old 07-26-2010, 12:06 AM View Post #17 (Link)
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I am on the verge of
a hollowed turtle's shell
I can only fill with
Sherlock Holmes
and ice-cream
with little bits of
caramel in it.

And then the bloodied
scepter
arrives, kind of like a
banana in it's appearance:
soft, yellow.
The pain is like a
stump
of a limb
something I lost
and can only repair
with Sherlock Holmes
and ice-cream
filled with little bits of
caramel and felts.

If there was a band-aid
made of Sherlock Holmeses
and caramel
ice-cream
I would use it to sew
my elbow up
once more
for your breath
was like a
banana: yellow and soft.

I have retreated to within
my turtle's shell
There is only
goddamn Watson
within and
melted ice-cream
with only little bits of
mint in it
reminding me of a
banana:
yellow, soft.

I haven't ever
eaten a banana
but I think it looks like
a scepter
made of Sherlock Holmeses
and ice cream
with little bits
of caramel in it.
Yellow, soft. Soft and
yellow.

Felts, they are fan-fucking-tastic
they're not like Sherlock Holmeses
(yellow, soft)
or ice cream with
little bits of
caramel in it
(soft, yellow).
They remind me of
my turtles shell
with minty shit
and Watson only.

My soul aches for
bananas and
Sherlock Holmeses and
felts and
ice-cream with
little bits of caramel in it
and
turtles and
awkward formatting and
scepters and
yellow and
soft.

If I could cry I would
but all the Sherlock Holmeses
and ice cream
have stolen my tears
from my primal ducts
and left me with
only a yellow,
soft shell
which in life
belonged to reptilian
creature known
as a turtle
whose shell
some people call a
carapace
but that's stupid.

So I must content myself
with crappy mint
stuff and goddamn Watson.
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Old 07-27-2010, 08:21 PM View Post #18 (Link)
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The sky
Is
Blue.

...Actually, we seriously had a big debate over whether this qualified as poetry in my Latin class... xD
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Old 07-28-2010, 08:40 AM View Post #19 (Link)
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
People like you belong in the zoo,
Dont be sad,
Dont be blue,
Frankenstein was ugly too...
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Old 07-29-2010, 04:49 PM View Post #20 (Link)
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Leaping higher higher higher,
the horse jumps over the fence
his rider willing to win-
that's his one and ONLY desire.
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