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Old 08-05-2010, 01:31 AM View Post #21 (Link)
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I am writing a poem
It is really fun
I scream for Ice Cream
Haha I made a pun.
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Old 08-05-2010, 01:32 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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Originally Posted by shaden93 View Post
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
People like you belong in the zoo,
Dont be sad,
Dont be blue,
Frankenstein was ugly too...
Omg, I actually lolled at that.
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Old 08-05-2010, 08:15 AM View Post #23 (Link)
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Originally Posted by yes View Post
Omg, I actually lolled at that.
Its awesome!!!
My teacher gave me a rose to valentines day with that message!!!
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Janitor: I always get this way in the fall, you know. Summer's gone, the days are shorter, it just makes me feel so...what's the word?

J.D.: Sad?

Janitor: Yes, that's it. I'm a janitor, so I couldn't think of the word, "sad". I was gonna say it makes me feel so mop.

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Old 08-06-2010, 08:14 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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A warrior rises from the ashes.
His sword as sharp as a jelly worm on a
sunny, August day--dork!
I remember those lazy days, as daises lay.
Roses dancing in the breeze and bees buzzin'--
playing that spring song, on a sunny, August day.
Speakin' of songs, I heard that there's a new DJ
in town. Hope he's good. x-D-iary was found on the
white street yesterday. Was it yesterday? Maybe it's
the future... waiting b-e-h-i-n-d us. Sigh-sigh-sigh-die~
die-sigh-sigh-die-shoot! Shoot Barney in the head-why?
Because one of his songs bought a corner in the right side
of my brain--The wheels on the bus go 'round and 'round,
'round and 'round, 'round and 'round. The wheels on the bus
go 'round and 'round, all through the (damn) town.
The babies on the bus go wa-wa-wa-wa-wa-wa------ No
one knows why? But everything must have a cause and an effect,
like that W-W-W-C question. Some people claim they know the
answer to it. Do they? Do they really know?

イロわにおえどちろぬるわがよたれぞ

つねならんういのおくやまきょーこえて

あさきゆめみじえいもせず    
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Old 08-08-2010, 12:43 AM View Post #25 (Link)
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D: Ya'll mocking heartache poems, fuck you guys.

Spoiler:
A cat sat on my lap
A cat took a nap
A cat jumped of my lap
A cat meow and said dib dap
A cat licked his willy instead of doing a fap fap
A cat then tried to make it into a rap (poem)
A cat slashing his fucking furry neck and died miserable and stuff
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Old 08-08-2010, 05:10 PM View Post #26 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Rage View Post
D: Ya'll mocking heartache poems, fuck you guys.

Spoiler:
A cat sat on my lap
A cat took a nap
A cat jumped of my lap
A cat meow and said dib dap
A cat licked his willy instead of doing a fap fap
A cat then tried to make it into a rap (poem)
A cat slashing his fucking furry neck and died miserable and stuff
I think i know why you said this...
You dont know how to write poems yourself so now you have to make people feel bad because of your personal proplems...

I dont like it...
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J.D.: Sad?

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J.D.: Let me explain, I...

Janitor: Go ahead, I'm mopping.

J.D.: Maybe I shouldn't bother...

Janitor: Maybe you mopn't.
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Old 08-09-2010, 10:03 PM View Post #27 (Link)
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Originally Posted by shaden93 View Post
I think i know why you said this...
You dont know how to write poems yourself so now you have to make people feel bad because of your personal proplems...

I dont like it...
Not really. Said it cause I wrote some soppy love poems ages ago. However, I will agree on the statement that I do not know how to write a poem.
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Old 08-13-2010, 03:33 PM View Post #28 (Link)
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Worst poem ever. (it's not even a poem) >.<

Spoiler:
Love
Hate
Sun
Moon
Light
Night
Dark
Bright
Fall
Rise
Up
Down
Left
Right
Walk
Run
See
(Nu-uh, I'm)
Blind
Sound
Silence
Bitter
Sweet
Us
Them
Peace
War
Him
Her
Come
Go
Stay
Leave
Attack
Defense
Smile
Weep
Live
Die
You
Me
Me
You (and I)
Quick
Fix of
Melancholy
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Old 08-15-2010, 05:57 AM View Post #29 (Link)
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You know you love me, I know you care
Just shout whenever, and I'll be there
You want my love, you want my heart
And we will never ever ever be apart

Are we an item? Girl quit playing
Were just friends, what are you saying
Said theres another, look right in my eyes

My first love broke my heart for the first time,
And I was like
Baby, baby, baby ohhh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine mine

Baby, baby, baby ohh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine, mine (oh oh)

For you, I would have done whatever
And I just can't believe, we ain't together
And I wanna play it cool, but I'm losin' you
I'll buy you anything, I'll buy you any ring
And im in pieces, baby fix me
And just shake me til' you wake me from this bad dream

Im going down, down, down, dooown
And I just cant believe my first love would be around.

And I'm like
Baby, baby, baby ohh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine, mine
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Old 08-31-2010, 02:05 AM View Post #30 (Link)
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Originally Posted by peepingthesmurf View Post
You know you love me, I know you care
Just shout whenever, and I'll be there
You want my love, you want my heart
And we will never ever ever be apart

Are we an item? Girl quit playing
Were just friends, what are you saying
Said theres another, look right in my eyes

My first love broke my heart for the first time,
And I was like
Baby, baby, baby ohhh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine mine

Baby, baby, baby ohh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine, mine (oh oh)

For you, I would have done whatever
And I just can't believe, we ain't together
And I wanna play it cool, but I'm losin' you
I'll buy you anything, I'll buy you any ring
And im in pieces, baby fix me
And just shake me til' you wake me from this bad dream

Im going down, down, down, dooown
And I just cant believe my first love would be around.

And I'm like
Baby, baby, baby ohh
Like baby, baby, baby noo
Like baby, baby, baby ohh
I thought youd always be mine, mine
LOL that is the worst poem ever.
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