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Old 12-03-2011, 09:09 PM View Post #1 (Link) If YOU need a critique, click here.
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Anyone need a critique? I'm willing to take anything fantasy, realistic fiction, teen, poetry, or sci-fi.

Need more points so I can submit my work. Thanks guys!

Btw, if you want to chat about writing let me know. I'm here to make friends as well as learn tips about writing and get advice & writing help!
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Old 12-03-2011, 11:17 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Originally Posted by NinjaBerrySharry13 View Post
Anyone need a critique? I'm willing to take anything fantasy, realistic fiction, teen, poetry, or sci-fi.

Need more points so I can submit my work. Thanks guys!

Btw, if you want to chat about writing let me know. I'm here to make friends as well as learn tips about writing and get advice & writing help!
Oooo I'm almost done with another draft of Division Points. I'd love for you to take a look at it once it's done (hopefully soon).

Edit: It is posted! HUZZAH!
  
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Old 12-04-2011, 10:06 PM View Post #3 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Wonderful, Dabs!!! I shall definitely take a look at it. I'll let you know what I think.
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Old 12-26-2011, 01:19 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Can you critique my poem "praise be to God " in poetry?
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Old 12-30-2011, 04:11 PM View Post #5 (Link) .
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I have a short story you can critique
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Old 12-30-2011, 06:30 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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Twilight, your thread is closed so nobody can critique it. To open it, you need to read the guides you've been sent links to and improve your own critiques. It's just fair.
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Old 12-31-2011, 10:26 PM View Post #7 (Link) Need Critiquing
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If you're willing, please read my short fantasy story. It's called Heir of the Dragon.

Thanks! I'm new, so I really don't know how things go on this site, but I'll figure it out.
  
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Old 01-15-2012, 04:07 PM View Post #8 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Ethereal Catalyst- I'm totally up for it! I will critique your story as soon as I get the chance. I love dragon fantasies.
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Old 01-15-2012, 04:46 PM View Post #9 (Link)
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7816

I would greatly appreciate a critique on the opening of my novel, which is a scifi/fantasy blend (unsure of the exact genre at the moment). I especially would like feedback on how the narrator is portrayed.
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Old 05-26-2012, 04:08 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Can anyone critique my short story "Surf's Up"? Thanks!

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...382#post148382
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