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Old 09-27-2007, 09:35 PM View Post #1 (Link) Critique The Person Above You!
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Okay, this is a thread where each person does a critique linked within the previous post, and then posts a link to their own thing they want critiqued. The idea is that every time you critique something in this thread, you are guaranteed to get a critique in return.
  
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Old 11-10-2007, 08:27 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Here's my Critique...
*Nice link not possible for me still so...*
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...=3379#post3379

There it is!. It's Shadow's The Lost Prince.


Next Person, please critique Chapter 3 of...

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...=2405#post2405


Is that how it's supposed to work?
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Old 12-06-2007, 12:22 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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Well I edited chap.3 a long time ago so I'm not gonna bother posting the link

So could the next person please crit this "practice poem"
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:29 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Critiqued.

Please critique this. Shorty Story.
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Old 12-10-2007, 04:33 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Please crit. Mlle. Formage -short story-
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Old 12-12-2007, 05:01 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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Ok, I crit it Nyx

Next person please crit this story

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...=8804#post8804

I would put it in a fancy link but the bell just rang and I have to leave so ...
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Old 12-14-2007, 12:51 AM View Post #7 (Link)
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Once again, please crit. Mlle. Formage -short story-

If you've already crit.ed this then you can just skip this post.
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Old 12-22-2007, 02:17 AM View Post #8 (Link)
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Critique.

Please critique RumplyStickyCheese
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Old 02-10-2008, 08:38 AM View Post #9 (Link)
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Eve has left now, but that doesn't matter, I'll still crit it.

Please to crit The Adventures of Roderic, The Satirical Hero.
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Old 03-06-2008, 01:57 AM View Post #10 (Link)
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I didn't really crit but I did the best I could.
Some haikus I found.
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