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Old 05-21-2008, 03:16 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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Spambot alert! Spray it with a hose! Of fire!
Edit: Thank you.
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Old 04-27-2009, 10:11 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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I want to continue this, since it's a really good idea. And since Guessed didn't post anything... or that person did and just edited it I'll just post a link and go crit someone's work...

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=2686 Just Like Koi {Chapter One}


EDIT: I critqued Gabby's story. If anyone was wonderin'.
  
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Old 04-28-2009, 12:49 AM View Post #13 (Link)
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=2963

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Old 04-29-2009, 07:38 AM View Post #14 (Link)
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This thread ought to be revived. I critiqued yours, bowie.

Chronomancer Chapter Three
  
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Old 10-05-2009, 09:20 AM View Post #15 (Link)
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I can't believe this thread was allowed to die! Nooo! Also, I can't believe I never noticed it before...
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Old 10-05-2009, 09:25 PM View Post #16 (Link)
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I critiqued yours, Smiles. (:
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Old 10-09-2009, 03:53 AM View Post #17 (Link)
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Oh, I bags this one. No one touch it. It's MINE! MINE, I TELL YOU!
...I just can't do it now, is all. Work starts up in 3...2...1...
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Old 10-09-2009, 04:00 AM View Post #18 (Link)
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I just critiqued, Smiles over there.

A once over on my latest story, "Sally", would be greatly appreciated.
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Old 10-09-2009, 03:30 PM View Post #19 (Link)
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Done, Mr Frankenstein. *tips hat and hitches up imaginary belt*

Anyone who's interested, a quick look at Craving in the lyrics section would be marvellous. (Be warned, though. It's a sacred piece).

EDIT: Or someone else could just take my turn. I'm pretty fortunate with my critiques - I always seem to get more than some people... (also, Grey Day has plenty of critiques at the moment and Death's Mistress is a novel, which you kind of have to read from the beginning, and it's something like thirteen chapters long now...)
  
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Old 10-21-2009, 09:17 AM View Post #20 (Link)
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I'll take a look at Craving for ya.

One more critique on Sally would be nice. When you're a horror/western writer, people tend to overlook your work.

Also, I'd like to post this offer here.
I will be on a critiquing binge this week.
By Sunday I want to have read and critiqued 7 different things. I have two done so far, so that's five more chances for you people!
PM or VM me what you want read and I will get to it by Sunday!
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