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Old 10-21-2009, 03:20 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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This is the essential reason we all joined this site. Crit ticket on Sally. I'll do it ASAP.
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Old 10-22-2009, 02:40 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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I haven't gotten many crits. Only about 5 or 6. My newest post hasn't been critiqued, and I'm posting some more tomorrow. I wish people could just critique something without being asked. My critiques have come from directly asking the person.

Enough of my ranting. Go to Dystress in the Novels (Members Only) section.

And crit ticket on Sally. I'll get to it tomorrow.
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Old 10-22-2009, 04:22 AM View Post #23 (Link)
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critiqued!!

Critique My very first short story, Critique? its under short story members only!
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Old 10-22-2009, 05:30 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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Done, xcomplex. I like the recent activity on this thread. Let's keep it going. Requesting crits on either of the two MOST RECENT posts show in my sig. Thanks in advance!
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Old 10-22-2009, 06:16 PM View Post #25 (Link)
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FRANKIE

Got your's jcsk. Now someone do mine. :[ Also, the most recent update to the story is at the bottom of the thread. Crit that, not the first post.
EDIT: it's actually in the middle. :p my bad
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Old 10-24-2009, 04:45 PM View Post #26 (Link)
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Just when I thought this thread had gained some momentum...

Finished with yours, Adri. Same as before, either of my latest posts will do. You can find them in my sig. Thanks in advance!
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Old 12-02-2009, 04:37 PM View Post #27 (Link)
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I find it unfortunate that this thread has faded into oblivion once again. I mean, it must've been stickied for a reason! So... in the footsteps of Zombified, I am going on a critiquing binge!

I'll do my best to complete one crit a day over the next week, so feel free to drop me a PM or VM if you want something looked at. I'll probably critique at random if I don't get any requests, but I'd prefer to comment on something that someone wants an opinion on.

Note: I only ctitique fantasy/sci-fi shorts/novels. I don't read/write poems or lyrics, so I'm no use there.
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Old 12-05-2009, 01:19 AM View Post #28 (Link)
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In an effort to keep this going...

I finished your crit on chapter nine, Jcsk.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3883 Either chapter one or two works.
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Old 12-05-2009, 10:45 AM View Post #29 (Link)
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Done and dusted. Oh, and good job Mayjk, let me know when you post the next chapter.

Golden Gate: Conclave. Give it a whirl.
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Old 12-05-2009, 07:28 PM View Post #30 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Draxzar View Post
Done and dusted. Oh, and good job Mayjk, let me know when you post the next chapter.

Golden Gate: Conclave. Give it a whirl.
Critiqued! Character Development please? The link's in my sig!
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