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Old 03-22-2017, 06:46 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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I then turned around and slapped him, but shortly after he shot me in the stomach with a hand gun he had hidden in his belt
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Old 03-23-2017, 05:57 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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I let out a big fart and the bullet popped out and bounced at the hitman. He rushed away but the bullet followed him buzzing like a crazy bumble-bee. " Serves you right!" I shouted. "Never shoot at me, stupid jackass!"
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Originally Posted by reynoldredstool View Post
nice artilce
Of course it's nice article! Who would have doubted it! Thanks for kind words but may I ask you: is that your idea of making a contribution to the story?
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A stranger approached saying "What you got there?"
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A stranger approached saying "What you got there?"
"None of your business," I replied and delivered a huge blow to his stomach. But my fist bumped into something very hard. I heard my fingers crack, and an acute pain paralyzed my will for a moment. The guy laughed and said "Bulletproof jacket, eh? You liked it? In either case you are under arrest."
"On what charge?"
"I haven't decided it yet," he grinned, "but I will, be sure."
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