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Join Date: May 2012
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Okay guys, here's the deal. My college apps are due soon, including the essays. The only people I trust to critique my work are you guys, so I was hoping you could help me out. I really need someone to help me with essays (or at least give me tips on how to form them in a clear and organized fashion). Tips, advice, whatever. I really hope you help.
Because I need help. Badly. Thanks :3
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When is the due date, and how soon do you need the crits? I have a busy next few days but I should have some time Thursday, Friday, and over the weekend to take a look at any essays. And I'd be happy to look at whatever if that works for your time frame.
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Join Date: May 2012
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Thank goodness. I'd like to get one application in by December 1st for a particular school I have in mind, but I only have one essay to submit for that school so it wouldn't be a lot of work. The other application is due December 15th. Thursday would be great, and Friday is good too. It's fine if you aren't able to, I just have a lot of faith in this community xD Like I said, right now I just need one critique on an essay.
I have the skeleton of the essay done, I just have a hard time seeing what I need to work on, besides organization/ideas and wording. My essay is about why I wanted (and want) to be a writer. As far as requirements, I'm submitting it under "topic of [my] choice" and there's a 250-500 word limit. EDIT: two essays, but one is short because of a character limit. Thank you soooo much.
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I'd be willing to take a look. Disclaimer: I'm not an expert on essay-writing. But I can at least give you a general idea of what I think about it. Feel free to send it to me now, if you'd like. I'll try and have it back ASAP
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