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Old 02-16-2013, 06:47 PM View Post #1 (Link) Need Crits?
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Hey! I have some time on my hands, and will happily crit writing . I will crit short stories, or chapters (No poetry please). VM/PM with requests
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=10919

yes, Here is my attempt. Would you like to crit it ?
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