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Old 12-24-2012, 03:12 AM View Post #1 (Link) Critters' Place
Sibylline J. Backe (Offline)
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Seriously, if you need critiques on anything except poetry, come to me. I don't want to steal business from the other lovely people, but seriously. If you're having a hard time getting a crits on that chapter or a short story, just post here or send me a message. I'll be happy to solve your problem and I'll get it done in within 48 hours.
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The Rebellion is finally ready to make its mark and dethrone Lucian. There's only one problem: They need allies. In search of help from other nations, Sparrow travels around the world with Lucian's men hot on her heels . . .
Check out Sparrow!
More chapters to come soon.
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Old 12-26-2012, 01:50 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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You're a Jane Eyre person.

Reaching the summit of the garbage mountain

Harro, can you prease clitique dis?

Thannnnk youuuu.
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Old 02-23-2013, 03:17 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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If you're still going with this, would you mind taking a look at my chapter one? It's here.

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