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Old 02-14-2013, 07:51 AM View Post #11 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Reminder: I'm always available......blah blah blah........so if you need any crit, just notify me somehow!
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Old 02-18-2013, 09:49 AM View Post #12 (Link)
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I dont know if you do short stories or not, but can you do this? Please?
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Old 02-23-2013, 04:13 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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Hey. Are you still going with this?

If so, it'd be great if you could take a look at ch. 1 of my novel. Much appreciated.
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Old 02-23-2013, 04:27 PM View Post #14 (Link)
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I would really love for someone to finally review my story Vile.
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Old 03-26-2013, 04:20 PM View Post #15 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Open as usual. I didn't do the chapter of GoodGracious as she already had way many responses much more in depth than I could give, or probably would have tried to. Hope she pardons me. Apart from that, anybody anytime.....
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Old 03-28-2013, 04:25 PM View Post #16 (Link)
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I have had the same chapter of my novel up for a good 2 or 3 months and it has maybe 80 views with no responses. It's killing me, especially since I don't post a new chapter without the previous one being critiqued. If anyone could get to that and give me a good, in depth critique, that would be beautiful. Thanks :3 Do not make it a priority over anyone else's though, put it at the bottom of your to-do list, seeing as how I do not have the next chapter ready anyway. But still, if you find the free time, need the points, or whatever the reason, it would be appreciated.

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Old 03-29-2013, 02:26 AM View Post #17 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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I must admit that I'm not a specialist in critiquing prose, but I have nothing against it. But I must ask you for some time as I'm currently 500 Km away from my hometown for the weekend, and the best I could manage would be Monday. But I'll definitely do it.
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Old 03-29-2013, 02:32 PM View Post #18 (Link)
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You certainly do not have to if you do not wish to x3 But if you do, thank you. And I hope you enjoy your vacation, or whatever you're doing so far from home xD The offer is also up for anyone else if they happen to be interested.
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Old 04-07-2013, 08:28 PM View Post #19 (Link)
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Arko, I was wondering if you could critique this:

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=11083

I know you don't specialize in prose, but I really liked the crit you gave me on a previous chapter, and I've had this one up for about a month with no response. If you could help, I'd really appreciate it.
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Old 04-09-2013, 07:35 AM View Post #20 (Link)
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Would be glad to! I'll get to it probably tomorrow, and if that's not possible, by this weekend. I'll be needing some time for prose, you see, so watch out for the critique.
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