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Old 04-21-2013, 09:24 AM View Post #21 (Link)
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Please could you critique either the second or third chapter of my novel The Ocean's Child on members only?
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Old 04-25-2013, 08:23 AM View Post #22 (Link)
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would you be able to critique "don't leave me in the dark"? it would be much appreciated and I will certainly critique your writing back.
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Old 04-28-2013, 09:54 AM View Post #23 (Link)
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Acknowledged, both of you!
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Old 05-03-2013, 01:57 AM View Post #24 (Link)
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Could you crit my piece "Over a Husk"? I'll crit yo ass back, son.
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Old 05-03-2013, 06:50 AM View Post #25 (Link)
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Wow, house's on fire! Prepare yo husk for a round, and watch yo back man!
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Old 05-04-2013, 03:27 AM View Post #26 (Link)
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Hey, could you please critique my story "Outside the Stars?" Any chapter will do.
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Old 05-08-2013, 03:50 PM View Post #27 (Link)
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Please critique the first chapter of my humour novel, Inferno? http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=11423

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Old 05-09-2013, 11:38 AM View Post #28 (Link)
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I need a critique on my latest work, the http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=11444 Killer Case. I'd appreciate it! I am very nervous because i intend to finish this book so opinions are vital
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Old 05-10-2013, 09:48 AM View Post #29 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Anastasia View Post
I need a critique on my latest work, the http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=11444 Killer Case. I'd appreciate it! I am very nervous because i intend to finish this book so opinions are vital
Hey, I'll crit yours if you like
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Old 05-10-2013, 12:41 PM View Post #30 (Link)
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