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Old 02-13-2013, 05:30 PM View Post #1 (Link) Need A Crit?
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It'd be my pleasure . . .
if you've got a novel that needs critiquing, I would love to help you out!

I feel I give very thorough and honest critiques, which can be good or bad. I think people should know when/where their writing could benefit from certain changes, so I'm not at all conservative with my constructive criticism, but it IS constructive (I promise).

I am also very careful to let you know where you've done something well out when I feel you've done something very effective, so it's never all bad :) Also (like most, I'm sure) I like to give commentary like I'm watching T.V. or something . . . which is good because it means I can picture your story in my head :) So if I don't say much, it's because I really thought it was good.

Err . . . I mostly like to crit novels because it helps my own writing, and I am a novelist, so anything I recommend, I find useful in my own writing. And I try not to be a up hypocrite :)

So, yeah, aspiring novelist, I've got your back! And I'll critique short stories as well, but I'm not as good with those.

Happy writing, y'all!
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Old 02-18-2013, 09:50 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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if you're into short stories, can you please crit this
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...d.php?p=165968
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Old 03-13-2013, 02:50 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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Hey, hon. I need crits on either of my two most recent chapters. Either one will help.

Ch. 9:
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=10989

Ch. 10:
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...ad.php?t=11083

Thanks!
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Old 03-23-2013, 02:24 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Hi,
I'd be honored if you'd critique chapter five of the novel i'm working on. It's called 'The Healer' and it's fantastical. I'd really love some help improving it. Here's the link.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...689#post167689
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Old 04-25-2013, 08:20 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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hi, it would be really helpful if you critique one of my poems. probably either "don't leave me in the dark" or "needles". I'll definitely return the favour though
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