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Old 07-19-2012, 04:08 PM View Post #1 (Link) Taking crit requests
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Just throw them at me. I'll do anything you ask me to except for lyrics. I can't critique lyrics.
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Old 07-19-2012, 05:55 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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I'm going to post something so you can crit it. Really I am. I've been meaning to post anyway.

EDIT: http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...032#post153032
  
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Old 07-21-2012, 02:30 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Do you crit short stories? I could do with a few critting. *sigh* Recently I've had way too much spare time. So my mind has overflown with words, hehe. Anyway back to the point, should I PM you my short? Or something else?
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Old 07-21-2012, 02:57 PM View Post #4 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Yeah, I do short stories. I do anything but lyrics (like I stated). You can send them to me however, PM/email would be fine. I am going to recommend that you post them on the site, that way you'll get more opinions than just me, but it's your choice.

Please note that Foyle is coming up so I am critiquing some people's poems for them at the moment and I am trying to write myself. Your story(ies) may then take a back seat until that is over.
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Old 09-18-2012, 11:22 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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If you are still open, I'd love to get another critique on my short story!

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...989#post156989

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Old 09-18-2012, 04:45 PM View Post #6 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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I guess my corner shop of critiques is back open! Request them here otherwise I will choose what ones I want.

Check out my list here.
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Old 09-20-2012, 03:33 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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I just posted the first chapter of my novel: The Wanderer. If you're not too busy would you be able to take a look at it please?

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=9729

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Old 09-23-2012, 08:22 AM View Post #8 (Link)
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http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...207#post157207

my fantasy novel "dancing macabre" they don't literally dance.
dancing makes some people happy sometimes and even in a huge massacre
some of the inhuman characters there are just enjoying the show. comical sociopathy and romance involved.

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Old 10-04-2012, 03:14 AM View Post #9 (Link)
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Hello!

It would be so great if you could take a look at this here. I have two versions of Part 1, but I am curious to know what people think of what I already have. I know it's a bit of a read, but I'll be so thankful forever.

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Old 01-24-2013, 11:35 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Wig View Post
Just throw them at me. I'll do anything you ask me to except for lyrics. I can't critique lyrics.
Will you crit either my poem "The Road to Nowhere" or "How it Goes" for me?

Maybe both?

Thanks!
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